Sample winning essay for Pterosaurs: Flight in the Age of Dinosaurs Class of the Month Contest - Ranjoy
Ranjoy's work comes from Laura Devlin's fifth grade class at P.S. 056 Harry Eichler in Queens.
This essay’s strengths:
- Presents information from the Museum exhibit relevant to the prompt with sufficient detail.
- Accurately presents science content relevant to the prompt with sufficient explanations that demonstrate understanding of the topic.
- Includes some use of precise and domain-specific language.
Needs additional support:
- Provides a concluding statement/section that does not relate directly to essay content