Sample winning essay for Pterosaurs: Flight in the Age of Dinosaurs Class of the Month Contest - Ranjoy

Ranjoy PS 056

Ranjoy's work comes from Laura Devlin's fifth grade class at P.S. 056 Harry Eichler in Queens.

 

    
 

This essay’s strengths:

  • Presents information from the Museum exhibit relevant to the prompt with sufficient detail.
  • Accurately presents science content relevant to the prompt with sufficient explanations that demonstrate understanding of the topic.
  • Includes some use of precise and domain-specific language.
 

Needs additional support:

  • Provides a concluding statement/section that does not relate directly to essay content