Sample winning essay for Pterosaurs: Flight in the Age of Dinosaurs Class of the Month Contest - Sukhmandeep
Sukhmandeep's work comes from Laura Devlin's fifth grade class at P.S. 056 Harry Eichler in Queens.
This essay’s strengths:
- Integrates relevant and accurate science content with thorough explanations that demonstrate in-depth understanding of pterosaurs and their fossils.
- Uses a labeled illustration of a pterosaur fossil to accurately communicate relevant information.
- Clearly describes what one fossil reveals about that pterosaur species.
Needs additional support:
- Uses definition of “fossil” directly from the text without paraphrasing.