Sample winning essay for Whales: Giants of the Deep Class of the Month Contest - Sumat
Sumat's work comes from Janet Sanchez's Kindergarten class at P.S. 121 Throop.
This essay’s strengths:
- Clearly defines adaptation
- Maintains focus throughout
- Names three whale adaptations and states what they are used for
- Uses accurate and relevant facts from contest readings and the “Whales: Giants of the Deep” exhibit
- Illustration depicts and labels the adaptations discussed in the essay