Sample winning essay for Mummies LeFrak Class of the Month Contest - Anthony

Anthony's work comes from Stefanie Podber winning fifth grade class at P.S. 56Q.

The essay’s strenghts:

  • Accurately presents information relevant to all parts of the promtp with paraphrased details from the exhibition
  • Integrates relevant and accurate social studies content with thorough explanations that demonstrate in-depth understanding of Egyptian and Peruvian mummies
  • Uses labeled illustrations to effectively communicate relevant information
  • Uses captions that effectively explain the illustrations
  • Includes an introductory paragraph that clearly introduces the topic of Egyptian and Peruvian Mummies
  • Provides relevant concluding paragraph