Janice's work comes from Stefanie Podber winning fifth grade class at P.S. 56Q.

The essay’s strenghts:

• Accurately presents information relevant to all parts of the promtp with paraphrased details from the exhibition
• Integrates relevant and accurate social studies content with thorough explanations that demonstrate in-depth understanding of Egyptian and Peruvian mummies
• Uses labeled illustrations to effectively communicate relevant information • Uses captions that effectively explain the illustrations
• Includes an introductory paragraph that clearly introduces the topic of Egyptian and Peruvian Mummies
• Provides relevant concluding paragraph