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Sample winning essay for Mummies LeFrak Class of the Month Contest - Najah

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Najah's work comes from Shailyn Rivas winning fourth / fifth grade mixed classroom class at PS513.

The essay’s strenghts:

 

  • Presents paraphrased information from the exhibition relevant to the prompt with sufficient accuracy and detail
  • Presents social studies content relevant to the prompt with sufficient accuracy and explanations that demonstrate understanding of Egyptian and Peruvian mummies
  • Uses labeled illustrations of Egyptian and Peruvian mummies to effectively communicate relevant information
  • Uses captions that effectively explain the illustrations
  • Includes an introductory paragraph that sufficiently introduces the topic of Egyptian and Peruvian mummies
  • Provides a relevant concluding paragraph
  • Demonstrates and maintains a well-developed command of standard English conventions and cohesion, with few errors response includes language and tone consistently appropriate to the purpose and specific requirements of the prompt.