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Sample winning essay for Pterosaurs: Flight in the Age of Dinosaurs Class of the Month Contest - Ranjoy

Part of the Student Work from LeFrak Class of the Month Contest Winners Curriculum Collection.

Ranjoy PS 056

Ranjoy's work comes from Laura Devlin's fifth grade class at P.S. 056 Harry Eichler in Queens.

 

    
 

This essay’s strengths:

  • Presents information from the Museum exhibit relevant to the prompt with sufficient detail.
  • Accurately presents science content relevant to the prompt with sufficient explanations that demonstrate understanding of the topic.
  • Includes some use of precise and domain-specific language.
 

Needs additional support:

  • Provides a concluding statement/section that does not relate directly to essay content