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Sample winning essay for Unseen Oceans LeFrak Class of the Month Contest - Zaylee

Part of the Student Work from LeFrak Class of the Month Contest Winners Curriculum Collection.

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Zaylee's student work comes from Janet Sanchez's winning kindergarten class at P.S. 121.

The essay’s strenghts:

  • Accurately presents information relevant to all parts of the prompt with effective paraphrased details from the article
  • Accurately presents information relevant to all parts of the prompt with effective paraphrased details from the exhibition
  • Integrates relevant and accurate science content with thorough explanations that demonstrate in-depth understanding of Kelly’s discovery and an ocean animal
  • Uses detailed labeled illustrations to effectively communicate relevant information about Kelly’s discovery and an ocean animal; each illustration has one or more labeled part
  • Maintains a strongly developed focus on the writing prompt for the entire essay
  • Description includes both Kelly’s discovery and an ocean animal along with accurate and detailed information about them