Please read the following rules and regulations before beginning your project. Review them with your parent, teacher, or mentor. Follow the rules and complete the forms as required. Failure to do so may disqualify your entry.
Participants are expected to conduct their investigations with honesty and integrity. The presentation of another's work as your own, plagiarism, or the fabrication or use of false data will disqualify a student from this and future Young Naturalist Awards competitions.
Your essay will be judged alongside the essays submitted by other students in your grade. Judges will grade your essay according to the following:
Topic
Judges look for an interesting and original topic. The topic does not have to be original to the science community, just new to you. It should be a topic that excites you, one that motivates you to investigate it. Examining the microhabitat of pinecones, identifying the aspen as a keystone species, and exploring streams to determine the needs of salmon, are just some examples of interesting and original topics. Check out the winning essays of previous years to see the topics students chose and how they focused their investigations.
Procedure
Judges look for strong, solid, and thorough science. Your investigation should be conducted according to the scientific method. Your question, hypothesis, and your methods for testing that hypothesis, should be clearly defined. Data should be gathered and recorded using a clearly described and defended methodology. In some cases, a control group may be required to validate your findings.
Analysis and Interpretation
Judges look for a clear analysis and interpretation of your data. Your question and conclusion should be supported by your observations and the data you collected. You may use information gathered from outside sources (i.e., personal interviews, Internet, encyclopedia, scientific journals and books) to learn more about your topic and to help you formulate your hypothesis and conclusion. If your findings are not conclusive, you should discuss the ways in which you would change your procedure and include questions for further research.
Documentation of Research Materials
The resources you use should be documented in the bibliography. If you quote a source, you MUST give proper credit. Judges look for well-documented books, periodicals, and Internet sources. Interviews may also be listed in the bibliography. It is best to use a variety of sources, not just Internet sources or school textbooks. References must be properly listed; see How to Write a Reference List.
Personal Voice
Judges look for an interesting, engaging essay told in your own words. Here are two examples:
7th grade: I have lived around saguaro cactuses all my life. I have seen this cactus in all its different shapes and sizes. They can grow to be almost 80 feet tall and weigh as much as several tons. Knowing that the saguaro cactus commonly lives to be about 200 years old, I realized that all these different shapes and sizes must represent the cactus at its various stages of life. I then began to wonder, what are the stages of life of the saguaro cactus?
11th grade: Beyond the beaver dam in the valley, two tremendous ancient aspens spread their gnarled limbs in a high protective canopy over me and the other smaller members of the grove. Their trunks are studded with sets of claw marks ascending to the level of the first branches. A black bear once climbed these ramets to scent-mark its territory, digging its claws into the periderm for a firm hold.
Clarity and Style
Judges look for clear and consistent focus in your writing and a logical progression of ideas. Good grammar, accurate word choice and usage, and correct punctuation and sentence structure must be used.
Use of Visuals
Judges look for illustrations, photographs, maps, and other visuals that support and add depth to the information presented in the essay. Visuals must be properly labeled. All visuals must be student-created. This includes drawings, maps, charts, and/or graphs. Excerpts from field journals are also acceptable. Photographs must be taken by the student. Art and photos downloaded from the Internet are not acceptable and will disqualify an entry. Visuals will be more effective if they are clearly labeled, and if they are referenced in the text. Accuracy, neatness, paper format, and presentation are also considered.
Each essay submitted to the Young Naturalist Awards contest must include a list of references. Use the following format when writing a list of references.
By a single author:
Marks, Paula. The Human Genome Project. New York: St. Martin's Press, 1995.
By two authors:
Polsky, Phillip E., and Lauren Shaeffer. A Guide to Rocks and Minerals. Oxford, MS: University of Mississippi, 1999.
By three authors:
Martin, Linda, Shelia Daar, and Mary Williams. Montana's Glacier National Park. West Glacier, MT: Falcon Publishing Company, 2001.
By more than three authors:
Ferrara, John E., et al. Hyraxes and Kopjes. Los Angeles: Rainbow Press, 2000.
By an unknown author:
Exploring the Everglades. Boston: Harcourt Brace, 2003.
By an editor:
Ronan, Colin A., ed. Science Explained. New York: Henry Holt, 1998.
Trainen, Martha. "New York State." Encyclopedia Americana. 1999.
Moffet, Mark. "Poison-Dart Frogs: Lurid and Lethal." National Geographic May 1995: 98-101.
McMahon, Hugh. "New Find in Long Island's Jurassic Park." Newsday 27 October 1998: B2.
Chu, John. "Habitat Use and Separation Between the Giant Panda and the Red Panda." Journal of Mammology 81.2 (2000): 438-455.
Wenner, Elizabeth. Dynamics of the Salt Marsh. Department of Natural Resources. Retrieved from the World Wide Web on 21 December 2003. http://water.dnr.state.sc.us/marine/pub/seascience/dynamic.html
Williams, Julie. Interviewed by Kolea Zimmerman. Volcano, Hawaii, 2 December 2002.
How to Avoid PlagiarismPlagiarism is using the work of another person without giving that person credit. It leads the reader to believe that the essay is original.
Original: A wolf pack is a very tightly-knit family group. There are usually between six and eight wolves in a pack, but some have as many as 30.
Paraphrase: Wolf packs usually have between six and eight wolves. Some packs have as many as 30. The pack is a very tightly-knit family group.
Use quotation marks when you use another author's work word for word. In parentheses put the author's name and the date of the author's work. You must then list the work in your bibliography.
For example:
According to Evans, "Elevated concentrations of zinc are absorbed by the gill tissues of fish, eventually preventing their intake of oxygen from the water." (Evans, 2001)
If the quote is more than four lines long, then you must indent it one inch from each margin. Do not use quotation marks. In parentheses put the author's name and the date of the author's work. You must then list the work in your bibliography.
For example:
Scientists at the University of California at Berkeley have conducted arsenic toxicity studies in Argentina, Chile, and India and have found that prolonged exposure to elevated levels of arsenic in drinking water caused cancer and resulted in death for 1 out of every 10 people. (Smith, 2001)
If you paraphrase, you must also cite the source of your information. In parentheses put the name of the author and the page or page numbers from which you paraphrased. List the source in your bibliography. For example:
Arsenic is an element widely distributed throughout the Earth's crust. It poses a great threat to humans and other animals when it shows up in drinking water. (Lester, p. 22)
Much of the information published on websites is not copyrighted. It is free to be used by anyone who wants to use it. However, just because it's free doesn't mean you can copy it word for word or paraphrase without giving credit. You must still use quotation marks and cite the source if you use information from the web.
First, do not rely on one source. If you are researching a topic, consult several sources, including encyclopedias, websites, books, and magazine articles. When you read a source, take notes. On a large index card, write down the title of the source and the author. Write down the main ideas and key points the author makes. Write down any sentences you may want to use as quotes. If you have copies of articles, use a highlighter to highlight important points.
When you are finished with your research, look at the information you have gathered. Use the information to identify the main idea or ideas. Write them down. Then look at the information you have about each idea.
Begin to organize your essay. Write a topic sentence that tells the main idea. Use the information from your research to write sentences that further describe or support the main idea.
Your first draft might be a little rough, but that is normal. You can go back over your essay and refine your writing. Becoming a good writer takes time and hard work. It may seem difficult at first, but with practice your writing will improve.